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I created this image as I mentioned before to point out hypocrisy in the church. Hypocrisy in the church is something I have witnessed first hand and it is truly one of my biggest pet peeves.
I created this image as I mentioned before to point out hypocrisy in the church. Hypocrisy in the church is something I have witnessed first hand and it is truly one of my biggest pet peeves.
a couple of suggestions about your magazine spreads
ReplyDeleteTHIS GOES WITH WEEK 10 - not present yet
1. page 2-3 let the black cover the whole background
2. let the content average out over the height of that page - a bit top heavy
3. large graphic is real nice - be sure not to crop it
4. page 4-5 title should stay off the blue
5. body copy should be averaged to two same height columns
6. page 6-7 i know there isn't much content here but make them all two page spreads
7. if the title and story are so far apart - byline should accompany story
8. 8-10 - GREAT
nathan