Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Week 7




 Concept
I created this image as I mentioned before to point out hypocrisy in the church.
 Hypocrisy in the church is something I have witnessed first hand and it is truly one of my biggest pet peeves. 

1 comment:

  1. a couple of suggestions about your magazine spreads
    THIS GOES WITH WEEK 10 - not present yet

    1. page 2-3 let the black cover the whole background
    2. let the content average out over the height of that page - a bit top heavy
    3. large graphic is real nice - be sure not to crop it
    4. page 4-5 title should stay off the blue
    5. body copy should be averaged to two same height columns
    6. page 6-7 i know there isn't much content here but make them all two page spreads
    7. if the title and story are so far apart - byline should accompany story
    8. 8-10 - GREAT

    nathan

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